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The Soiled Madonna

Posted on Jun 7th, 2008 by yaffie : yaffinity yaffie


To men who are MEN, searching for that unspoiled Madonna

A pretty face belies a deceptive heart
A curvaceous form,
You are snared from the start
Cause she knows you are an easy mark
Foolish man.

Her modus operandi is simply to snare
she mixes her mysterious brew with her stare
A potion that will render you feeble--
Engorged, aflame and snared by desire
She thrives on your brazen, passion fire!
Poor, simple, man.

This is the way of the worldly one.
Nothing more than a sophisticated vamp
A kinder word than lowly tramp
This is no angel from above
Only a demon from the pit of hell
Who lies in wait to ring your bell!

She lacks virtue and honesty
Knows nothing of love with dignity
Lacking in backbone, no integrity
She is a selfish, self serving entity
This woman feigns a life of God!

Buyers beware of her importuner's snare.
She'll leave you with a thump and a vicious glare!
Your soul tarnished and heaped in the dump!
A lowly tramp who perverts holy verse.

But a woman of virtue --
Oh, she knows the way!
From your heart or your soul she'll never stray...
Not from Good, or God, or -- Godly ways.

She will not approach you like a thief in the night
To snare or to woo with delirious brew
Nor enter your bed until she inquires
As to the intents and purpose of those desires
For she wants to cleave to the God in you;
Not to woo you from that lofty place
Or to leave you shamed, hurt, disgraced.
NO!!

What she wants is to share integrity
Never to diminish intellect or dignity.
She moves with you and not without
She is altogether righteous--without a doubt.
Wants nothing more than your success;

Love, respect and happiness.
This is a good woman.

Not given to jealousy, control or tests
This is a beautiful woman.
A truly, virtuous woman,
She defies the rest.

To all who are longing for love,
Beware the vamp, the lowly tramp!
She will catch you while your pants are down
Render you feeble, a harlots clown!

The sophisticated vamp,
Just a Madonna for fools,
Will lead you astray
Was so easy to do.

So your mind is polluted I'm afraid to say
With your heart and your soul did you stray
You were duped by a vamp, dumped by a tramp,
Wooed, tattooed and left with her stamp.


Foolish man who cannot see
Beyond a guise of femininity.
Open your eyes now and see her through
You are on your way to the harlots zoo.

But a man who is wise?
Will not be drawn
To the harlots mask that changes dawn
His eyes see through those just like you
He is not seduced by utter flooze.

For the fortuitous man who is led by his soul
And not by the garments that boldly expose
The harlots cleavage, or derriere...
This man is winner and champions discipline
He has tamed his ego and sees through the guise
His eyes are wide open, no stars in his eyes!

And the women like her?
Oh! They will never, ever, do
For the champ is a thoroughbred with a mind like you!
Champ of a man---
No soiled, despoiled, tainted, Madonna
Can ever woo, seduce, vanquish you!!


© 10-17-2005


by Yaffa



If you like this poem, you will be blessed by the rest of my poetry too.
Answer Me, Love,
Bittersweet
Blue
Solitude
A Woman in Transition
Passion
Wounded Hero
My Muse
Ego Games
more to come..

http://yaffa.gaia.com/blog/2008/6/passion

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Nicole : wakingdreamer
about 5 hours later
Nicole said

excellent modern version of the Biblical virtuous woman. Light!

yaffie : yaffinity
about 11 hours later
yaffie said

HEY!! LIGHT TO YOU MY FRIEND!! THAT IS A GREAT SYNOPSIS, WONDERFULLY PUT!! 
 I LIKE IT, NICOLEJEE! YOU ARE A SMART LITTLE COOKIE, EH?? I HADN'T THOUGHT ABOUT IT LIKE THAT AT ALL!!!

THANK YOU,
BLESSINGS..

owais : Be good, Do good
1 day later
owais said

Yaffajee, a sweet kiss on your forehead for this blowing piece of literary. Much gratitudes and many loves to you sincerely ,

I must acknowledge with mickle of applauses for your incredible talent of bringing perspectives through your writings which is quite hard for a writer. honestly I am shallow and novice at writings indeedy I concieved my first ever poem of life in the month of november or december of the last past year, 2007 which is titled by me as STREET KIDS please do visit it yaffajee because your words and opinions will be much appreciated and would be for my beneficiary in not making mistakes later. so I simply cannot point out outstanding qualities your poem augment with, and I am pardon for you as they will be latent. you know yaffajee why I said this because really your poem is very deep, rich, much sensual, and much great. whilst reading your poem, emotions conjure up fancies initializes and heart get squeeze with feelings your poem want imply on one's reader. to my opine you are the one very lovely and wonderful poet, of whose poems I am in love with. May God bless you highly and may shine you high with purity of your heart widely .

the also feature I adore in your poem is your rich use of vocabularies, I love it that you have inscribed tremendous vocabularies into your memories. If I have to attribute anything to you will be that you are another Shakespeare's to me. May God bless you with your incredible writing skill. you are amazing poet no doubt.
THANK YOU to you indeed for sharing your literary treasures with us.
HAVE A GREAT N MUCH HEALTHIER DAY, thank you again wondrous poet for this lovely poem.

tuam, sadev sukh-shanti tatha anandamevya, sadev satyata prem tatha santosha jeevan virajya !

    -OWAIS  

Nicole : wakingdreamer
1 day later
Nicole said

wow, and here I thought it was a deliberate rendering of proverbs 31

yaffie : yaffinity
1 day later
yaffie said

Owaisjee!! Thank you so much….shakepeare?? that is quite the compliment…how do I love thee? let me count the ways…Maybe more like elizabeth barret browning? not sure.. or shakespeare??

My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lips' red;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.
I have seen roses damasked, red and white,
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
And in some perfumes is there more delight
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know
That music hath a far more pleasing sound;
I grant I never saw a goddess go;
My mistress when she walks treads on the ground.
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare.

I wish I would be so great…

Anyway, do me a favor, maybe the english, not sure you really understood, please read it again for me, ok??

I want to make sure you understood it…and then please tell me again….

Enlightened.thinker : Light-plerker
23 days later
Enlightened.thinker said

Fascinating…..must read this again in the AM

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